All Comments on 'Advertising My Toy'

but....

It needed more Madison Avenue and less Match.com.

Wasn't as funny as you hoped, but I bet you could rework this idea with some better jokes, and it would score really well. As it was, I gave you a 3. Keep trying. This REALLY was a good idea. Thanks!

I am not a very Madison Avenue type of guy, if you want to run with the idea and do it a little differently, feel free. I would love to read it.