All Comments on 'Allyson Ch. 04'

by carvohi

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pkmapkmaover 12 years ago
Worth the wait

Great story. Nice twists and turns. I would like to see more development on the periferal characters but it's your story and it's one of the good ones.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Why is this in Romance?

This ain't fuckin' anywhere near being a romance.

smiling_readersmiling_readerover 12 years ago
Beautiful!

Welcome back! This just made my week :)

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