All Comments on 'Amber Has a Fantasy'

Should have paid attention in school. It would have saved you the pain of this effort.

I stopped after the first sentences. If you can't learn the basics, why should I try to decipher your mess?

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I don't expect polished, professional level writing, but I do expect some evidence that the writer has a basic understanding of the English language. There is none in this story.

Excellent. No cheating here. Had a fantasy and then attacked her husband. If more wives acted like that the divorce rate would go way down.

Husbands also. No double standard here.

A good short story on how a naughty though about another person can put to good user with your partner. As lo.g as she does not physically cheats then all is well in the marriage.

But thanks for writing. 3*

continue please

As others have said, nothing wrong with a fantasy. We all have them.

But, if it becomes an obsession is when she needs to get help before she cheats or it starts affecting marriage.

That said it was a pretty ordinary and bit lame fantasy.

Wannabe whore dreams.