All Comments on 'An Opportunity Not To Be Missed Ch. 22'

dint even read it and rating it a perfect 100 :))

Well worth the wait.

Glad to see a new chapter up. I read that your already working on 23...2 months was a looong time to leave us hangin there Bambi. Hope to see Ch. 23 before June 3rd lol. Keep it up.

Too long to wait, but worth it! Have been checking daily for a new entry Bambi, dont leave it so long next time please.

Long wait but well worth it, fantastic twist using Indian Man hope we see more of him or similar. Lovd the new settings of Mandy / Car / Coutry lanes / fields. Wonderful, please keep up this fantastic series and I hope you get more time to write Chapter 23 so the unbearably hard waiting isnt too long.

Great. Wonderful writing. I agree, the setting, scene, upskirt, all great.

I'm still luke-warm about about your latest offerings. Not enough mandy dialogue, shes too willing to accept the old guys advances, theres not enough cunningness/craftiness/slyness/cleverness... On a more positive note i'm really liking the way all the old guys in the neighborhood are starting to fancy their chances. Theres a whole community of dirty old men lusting after her now and some of them know of her reputation. I liked the way you had Ted complicate the story. Can't wait for the next one !! Please don't leave it as long

I just love the Mandy stories, never liked the mother thing os the last couple of stories were top notch. There one thing i liked better in some of the older ones and that is that Mandy was forced to wear a certain kind of outfit for an special someone. The degradation for the poor girl was just incredible...keep up the good work.

hi bambigirl, i hope you put more twist into it, like what you did with one your story about a black cab driver. that was totaly unexpected and what a twist, the black guy got lucky in the end. involve someone that is briefly introduce at the beginning of your story, then surprise us with a twist later in the end :)

As a new fan, and a writer myself, i am very impressed. Looking greatly forward to your new chapters. Great talent.