All Comments on 'An Unusual Beginning Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love this story, need for updates.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story!!!!

MelletoniaMelletoniaover 1 year ago

Please keep it coming. I love this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

ZACHARY & CIAR

Are you ever going to complete this Story.

4Klo_Black204Klo_Black20over 1 year ago

Sooooooo where is the update to this…..?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Lovely story!

mssoft2hldmssoft2hldabout 1 year ago

In the beginning of the story she’s doing some real 1997 stuff of scanning the photos and emailing them. And she was having a phone call with someone and she slammed the phone down in the cradle. when was the last time you slammed the phone down? But then it moves to she’s on a plane with a mask on because of Covid. The timelines just don’t match I assume that you started writing it a long time ago and then kind of picked up on it recently. The reality is she was raped and it’s being downplayed. I hate the way she’s a gentle soul and doesn’t want any revenge on her former friends. Not me, that would be my first stop but nobody accused me of being a good person

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Hi.

Looking forward to reading more. Great premise and writing but, needs more work if you are still planning to re-publish.

4Klo_Black204Klo_Black20about 1 year ago

Bru, it's been four months 😭 when are you going to post? 😭 please, what happened in chp 9??????

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I remember this story from the sweetest taboo fiction site. Wonder story but I do not believe the author will come back and finish this novel.

6King6King5 months ago

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