by patty_parker60
at the start of the story the front door got locked and bolted, so how did the others open the front door?
what does it matter? i didn't even remember that until u brought it up..i was more concerned with the nasssty sex!
If you read the entire series, you would realize, they live there. Hence they have keys!
one can see a marked improvement in yur style since you started this and the other series...the hot and nasty sex has always been A++
is the heat and nastiness more important than pointing-out a minor error/oversight? I don't think so!
I’m sorry, but a 15''×4'' dildo is just stupid. There’s simply no way any human ass can accommodate that size. Completely breaks the immersion, because it’s so ridiculously huge that you can’t sell it, and then you even want to tell me that it simply fits when “mercilessly pushed”? Nope.
because "Melanie pushes mercilessly forward" with the "15" long, 4" thick black latex phallus" Clara now gets to wear diapers.
I'm aware of the valid points some of you have pointed out (15 x 4 strapon); I'm re-writing this, at a much slower pace, and with added verbage. I should have a draft ready soon