by michael2956
My thoughts on this story, "it can't happen again, it just can't." Just two nasty cheaters with no thought to their marriages.
Two things I hate are married cheaters and authors who write half a tale.
no rating
Have never rated a story as 5 star, This is authentic,moving and erotic
But it left me feeling somewhat depressed. Why? Too close to real life.
Two people get together and fuck their marriages away.
It wasn't even a good stroke story. They had no morals so their being married provided no tension. Pointless
An afterthought at best.Just a couple of cheats. Not very erotic
I am spoilt forever and I think of how the husband could guess this and how I could write to an EXCELLENT REVENGE STORY.................Am I wrong?????
loved your writing...erotic...excellent use of language and well paced.
Don't think it belongs in "loving wives" ...not unless the Anne's husband is watching her take it from the closet...
A cheating slut and a cheating asshole story. Darn, sure don't see many of them in this site.