by averagewifey
After reading my own story, I have to admit that this brief revision of the real thing that happened is rather uninspiring. When writing, the vivid memories in my mind must have overshadowed the content of my words to the point that I thought this was one of the hottest things I had ever written. Alas, only in MY mind. I will try to do better next time. ~Average Wifey
Hey, you are writing vigniettes. This one was hot for those of us on the receiving end, even if it did not match the real thing. With your comment we caan only guess at the REAL experience.