All Comments on 'Big Bully'

I hope there's more where this came from?!

We are off to a good start.

Expect to read new chapters as they become available.

Hurry the suspense is terrible!!

when you start a story, it's almost like you're making a contract with your reader. If you begin something, it has to connect with the rest of the story. Why does she feel what she feels when she hugs her ugly friend? Why does she hate bullies so much? Why is she actually a crazy bat thing instead of a real person all along and why didn't she notice that from the beginning, and why does that even make sense?

Concept seemed nice but I was done after the 5th para. Better luck next time