All Comments on 'Blind Leading the Blind Ch. 06'

Dave,

Another excellent effort! I enjoy how you develop believable and sympathetic characters for your stories. The pace was just right and the emotional ending was perfect. Thanks for the treat.

RME

This is an erotic but realistic slice of life. Is that why

almost nobody comments?

I can't say that this is your best story yet, but that's because I haven't read them all! I really enjoy the way you write, something about it is very realistic and romantic. It is so nice to find something like this on a site where there are some really bad stories out there. So thank you for several very well written stories. Looking forward to even more great stories.

I really enjoyed your story, both for the content of love and submission as well as for your writing craft. The end was significant as has been stated before in the comments.

Thank you for another great story line. Will there be more about this couple, I hope so.

Jim L.

This whole story set is VERY well done! Just one tiny recommendation: her final statement should be "Please, Master; MY Master; I am yours." Is that trivial enough? Great story!!