by Vitalsigns
This story proves that understated erotic fiction is soooo much more arousing than straight out pornography. The scene in the dark bedroom under the covers was intense. Well written. Thank you.
The seduction was done so well, great writing style and very hot. Story was much better than most and deserves a perfect 10 but I could only give you a 5!
Very nice. Not overstated. Like nice music. I am glad i came acros the story.