All Comments on 'Bound to My Mate Ch. 20'

This was GREAT. It deserves an award of some kind. Thank you for such a fantastic story!

Hi a great story you should write more what happened to the other girls and elizabeth did she have any pups.

Awesome story!! I loved it! You should write another one similar to it or one about Elizabeth having pups! Either way, great job!!

Loved it. Really hoping you write a sequel or another were story.

I would be forever in love with you if you continued this- even if just in small one shots. I'm dying to know if Joel and Elizabeth have pups and I'd really like a few short stories over some of the newest mated pairs. Lucas and June, Dia and Will, Donna and Paul, Emily and Joseph, Rick and April. They're all just so cute! So, pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease!

I read the whole story from the begining and its my firm beliff that you are an amazing writer and you have a passion for it like no other I have read you truly deserve all the praise you have been given and you should think about turning this int turning this into a book and getting it published I look forward to reading more of your work in the near future and would really enjoy seeing further chapters for this story thank you.....the blair witch

Hi,

I just read the whole story and really enjoyed it. Thank you!!!

But this story has a serious problem: It has too many inconsistancies and contradictions and I feel neither the witches nor the rogue wolves were used to their actual potential as foes.

For example why could Alpha Germain not contact his abducted mate telepathically to determine where and with whom she is.

Why do rogue wolves abduct werewolf women when they can only produce offspring with their true mate. On the other hand, when they can produce offspring with just any female werewolf, then why didn't they just turn the captured human women to form a regular pack. Why are there no mated rogues or female rogues.

What about female wolves finding a male mate.

Why are humans who stumble upon the werewolves killed or turned. If these humans actually just find the wolves because they have "wolf" in them already then it makes sense that they go crazy after knowing of the wolves and then return to their human lives. What you gave as reason on the other hand didn't really make all that much sense.

The first abduction doesn't make any sense, either. If the rogues wanted to hurt Alpha Joel, then the only thing that makes sense is to either kill her immediately, leaving Joel grieving and without a mate, and therefor the pack weakened, or to blackmail him to get his money. For neither of these possible purposes "parking" her with with the neutral Lucas makes the slightest bit of sense.

Then the young witch Ryana as a foe was pathetic. Now the idea with the spell that fooled Joel into thinking she was his mate and Elizabeth was her was quite nice (a bit like that polyjuice potion in Harry Potter), but the revelation that the spell actually didn't even work just ruined that whole part of the plot for me, she was not even dangerous in any way. Particularly so when only pages later it is revealed that there actually is a much stronger type of magic. Why haven't you made her use some kind of source magic to do the polyjuice potion trick on herself and Elizabetz to make her a reasonable adversary?

And there is more.

As I said, I find that the story of Elizabeth and Joel is really interesting and charming. Slave to the Servants doesn't have that sort of problem by the way. The whole thing is good, it really really deserves a thorough re-write of the adventure part of the plot and I want to encourage you to do just that!!!!

Firstly, no, I currently I don't plan to write a story to upload here, nor will I offer my services as a beta reader. By the way, I'm not of the opinion that this is neccessary to criticise some aspects of a story.

I'm not a native English speaker. I understand English pretty well, I am fluent enough to write comments on here, I'm not fluent enough to write anything literary in English that is satisfactory to what I would like to read myself. While I can indeed help with plot problems in a story in a foreign language, I can't offer actual beta reading for the above reason because that's a lot more than just tweaking plot problems. I do beta reading on a platform in my native language occasionally.

And secondly, my current writing project is a mostly non erotic fan fiction adventure story, so not stuff for this platform anyway.

And by the way, my comment doesn't contain any slander or other unpleasantries about the story. If I wouldn't have found it sufficiently entertaining I wouldn't have made it through 20 chapters of it. I said nowhere it's a bad story, I just said the adventure part of the plot is not really skillfully crafted in some parts and leaves me a bit dissatisfied and it has inconsistancies.

Love love love this story. Please don't stop.

I enjoy a good fantasy story, and this exceeds the qualities of a good story. It's simply amazing and rather difficult to put down. In fact, I lost a lot of sleep and writing time for my own stories from staying up to read this. Great job.

I'd love to read more about other packs, especially why the trackers were being traded... Please please please keep writing

Don't know what world you're take me to or what a magination your start with next time but I'm sure it will be fantastic please write again soon

I have spent the last two days reading every chapter and I loved it!!! It was so detailed and well written. I hope to read whatever else you write and I think you are very good at capturing the moment. Thank you for sharing!!

I read your other story STTS first and was amazed. However I had absolutely no interest in a werewolf story, but knowing you had another story out there that I hadn't read kept calling to me. So much to the chagrin of my household chores I began reading this story. Again I was blown away by your writing. Thank you very much for my trip to the store for batteries.

I have always been fascinated with werewolves and animal shapeshifter stories. I got so hooked with this one.. It took me two nights to finish this. I loved the character development and I would love to read more of this.

I am new to reading werewolf stories yours is the second I have read.

You drew me in with laughter and tears . Many parts were hard to read .

I had to stop when the tears filled my eyes and reread the page I was on.

The characters were so full of life .I hope you continue to write .

Thank you for the gift of your were-world .

I didn't comment before because I couldn't stop reading!! I heartly enjoyed your story and I'm looking forward to reading the other one you've posted!!! :D If this is your first time writing, then wowzers... you have talent!!

Thank you for many hours of pleasure! I hope you continue to write stories like this...to not would be a shame with such talent. Also, Thank you for finishing the entire story. So many just stop for no apparent reason, leaving you mid-air with no where to land. To have talent is nice...to share it...FANTASTIC.

I loved this story but not how it ended i was looking forward to her being pregnant and experiencing that while thing for the first time.

I love this story. Are you planning on expanding? I want more Elizabeth and Joel!

I wish this story could have went a few more chapters. Mentioning pregnancy left the story hanging without the readers being able to experience them becoming parents. Please write a few more chapters and expand this story about her conceiving. Other than that drop off this is an excellent story that I have now read 3 times. Great writing. Please continue this series.

Wonderfull story well done is my fav so far :)

I loved this story. Continue writing

Loved this story! Please if there is any chance of you writing a carry on with what happened to the other un-mated human women! Would be awesome! And if alpha Sebastian ever finds his mate!

This story is amazing! i can;t help thinking there must be more.

I've read all your stories and I think your an amazing writer. Here's an idea for your next one... Vampires. Think about.

Is there a sequel to this story?! Really want to know!

Great story. I would love to read more.

Great story!!! You are a great writer!

You are an outstanding writer, if you ever have anything published you need to share it on here. The story was outstanding, an quite literally took my breath away with its surprises and I especially loved how neatly you wrapped everything up in the end. Thank you for writing, it's truly amazing.

Super story. I've read it twice now and loved it.

What a great story and characters.

Just brilliant

Simply amazing, mate!!! I couldn't stop reading this piece of yours. Truly captivating. The plot's carefully laden out unlike the others who engage into a conflict-repeating manner in making their pieces. I couldn't get enough. How i wish you could tell us more of their life, Elizabeth having pups, Joel going into fits of illogical jealousy over someone close to his mate, etc. Thank you for giving me some break in my stressful life.

PS: I so love Dia...I can see myself in her, haha. XOXOXO

Amazing its just perfect! I can't wait to read it all over again from the start.

I can honestly say this is my favorite werewolf story! I wish it wasn't finished. I SO wanted to see the Alpha have pups :( Still Brava DoctorWolf... BRAVA!

I really enjoyed reading the entire story. Cannot wait to read more of your stories. I honestly wish that I could put thought to words like you did. Good job, keep on writing.love it, love it, love it.

Thank you for Bounded To My Mate.

.. I'm more in love with, Will or Dominick. :) .. Dominick. How cool and wily (and hot) is he? Love the way he had the whole thing planned out with meeting his mate, down to the earrings :).

Totally awesome story, very epic! I hope you do more with this story. Wolves, witches and humans all brought to a happy ending (well for the wolves). You brought the characters to life when described their feelings and doubts. Please keep writing for us!

But disappointed you didn't have her get pregnant after you drew a lot of attention to the possibility by mentioning estrus and if she was fertile earlier in the story.

Plz make more werewolf story's you are such a good writer

I really wanted them to have pups... You should totally continue this story! I fell in love with these characters!

I have spent the last two days reading this series it is brilliant. You left us with so much to continue with a new series, I hope you continue with this series.

I'm hooked and completely addicted. But all great thimg must come to an end (even though im really sad this story is over). Thank you fo keeping me up till 4am all week lol while I read your stories after work. lol I cant wait to read your other stories :D

i hope you make a sequel. her pregnant would be so amazing

YOU R NOT BACK AND I DOUBT U EVER WILL BE BACK

I would love to see a sequel with Elizabeth pregnant

great story i love werewolves it was very good keep up the good work i cant wait for the sequel,make more werewolf stories to. lol i wish i was a werewolf now more than ever before 😆 i will be looking forward to more of your work you're awesome

I really enjoyed this story , I hope you write a more.... loved it .

I hate to see this end. So many more possibilities. Hope you write more on this pack.

Great job, and thanks!

VisualPerv

You write stories that entertain. I've read both of your series and if you still publish somewhere I'd love to know where it is.

It was really fun to read your story. You are a real talent. I beg you to continue, becouse i think there is so much more in this story to tell. It should be a series like the great ones. Black dagger brotherhood from J.R. Ward, Immortals after dark from Kresley Cole for example. Thank you for the fun i had.

Wow this was the most action-packed story I've read on this site. At first I was a bit apprehensive about the characters and their development but you totally blew us all away by the end! This was so enjoyable to read, I wish it didn't have to end. If you ever wrote another installment on this series I know it would be appreciated! Thank you so much for writing!

Last story was from 2011. Loved your stories though had to stay up all night jus to BBC finish them all.

THIS STORY IS UNPUT DOWNABLE!

I have read this story several times now. Each time I still enjoy it almost as much as I did the first time. The love that they share is limitless. A great and exciting love story.

I doubt you will read this now, but if you do I hope that you write again someday. Wonderful story, I lost a Loy of sleep as I could not put it down. With some editing and reworking I have no doubt this could be published by a publishing company, no self publishing needed.

All I can say about these stories, they just are happiness ! Simple and very good ! Thanks a lot !

I really hoped that something like that happened to me while reading the story and I suddenly realised... its just a story ... I m really mesmerised by it!!!

I always wait until the end to comment but feel I should have after every chapter. What an incredible story. Thank you.

I have also read this story several times and would love to have more about the pack. Do they have pups? Do Dia and Will go back to Cedrics? More info on the pack please xxxx Look forward to your writings as always.

Great story. Thanks for writing it and sharing it.

I enjoyed this story. I wish we could've gotten to know Dominick earlier. I liked his character: cunning and playful

Unputdownable!!! Abso-fuckingly-awesome! I have to wait till the end here to thank you for making my waking hours livable. The lack of sleep & eye bags trying to finish this are worth it. You are a great storyteller & a phenomenal writer, I'm not surprised if you are already an accomplished author. From start to finish, the suspense & storyline is gripping & original. And the hot scenes.....phowarr!!!! Madam Doctor, you really know your human & wolf anatomies, so, well done! And, lastly, please thank Joel, your hubby mate, for sharing you with us. :-) Well done.

Surely the meetings with the other packs were equally different and interesting.

Omg couldn't stop reading the whole story was just incredible still craving more even though it's over

I have read and re-read this story and I love it more each time. Thank you for writing such an amazing story, each chapter just pulls you right in. i would love if you ever decided to continue into another series.

I have stayed up late reading when I should be in bed haha I could not put it down. I wish you would continue until after they had little ones. Even so I loved every minute of it. So much detail through it all. You should mmake it into a book. I would be first in line to buy it haha so thank you, thank you, thank you for this fantastic story =] I do hope to read more of what you come up with.

I absolutely loved this story- completely hooked on the characters. I realize every story has it's ending at some point, but this one could go on & I'd keep reading!

Thanks for the story.

Oh hell no! I was robbed, we need a modified final chapter. Where is our Maryellen final piece?! I was so waiting for that!! (Pouting;( )

Gawd that was an awesome story though! I could literally enjoy several more chapters of just changing other humans from different tribes and the character interplay involved. Just loved it though! Now I need to see when you wrote this and what else you've done! BRAVO!

I love your world! It was fantastic and detailed and so realistic. I wish you would write a sequel. Maybe about when they have kids? You never explained how that works in their world. Sooo that means you should right? :P However, even if this is the end this story as been the best I have ever read on this site. Bar none. Good luck in your future stories!

I absolutely loved this story! Somewhere I read that this was your first story, and honestly, I can believe it. I can see where you grew every chapter, and that just made it better! I'm really excited to read more of anything you write, please keep it up!

This is my third time reading this story and I still can't get enough. I hope you will do a second part to this story and write a book. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Better the second time around; thank you.

this is my fourth time reading all twenty chapters in succession. Love the whole series. doctor wolf, please give us more of the Latro and Benson clans.

Just beautiful and truly amazing. I wanted to be apart of it so bad! I laughed and cried along with the characters and it hurts to let this world go. I immediately started tearing up seeing the words "The End". I hope you write more I really love your writing. A very thrilling read and everything about it was 5 stars.

I have read this story numerous times as well and each time I get even more hooked to the characters and to the whole emotion and mystique of the story. You are a fabulous writer and I hope you can continue on with this theme in the future...

Please.. I know it's been a few years but... Please write more. This was by far the best story I have ever read here and the only time I have ever rated or commented on a story.

This is one of my favorites but it still feels slightly incomplete I can't wait for you to be in a position to write more.

Most stories here do not seem to grasp that a woman can be submitted without being less then or humiliated. I loved this story. It would be soo awesome to read about the pups they wanted together and the making there of. Most amazing story I have read on here though!! Thank you soo much!!

I have to agree with some of the other posts. It doesnt feel complete. If it was me i think i would have ended with the birth of Elizabeth's firstborn son. It still feels like there is a story to tell. Also what about that alpha that was missing his daughter. joel promised Alpha Germain trackers in exchange for Rick and the others. Did they ever find her? Keep writing!

I never comment on stories but yours was amazing that I just had too. I stayed up late into the wee hours reading this story. Please don't let it finish with chapter 20. It feels like there's still so much to tell. We are all eagerly waiting to read about Joel and Elizabeth's pups. Please continue the series. You have a gift for writing.

You're amazing :) please respond and let us know you haven't given up on this story.

<3

I don't think I've ever written a comment on this site, but I had to for this one. I've reread this story at least 5 times since I found it. I love your writing! PLEASE make this story onto a series! You created such great characters with such a cool world, I'd love to know what happens next!

I couldn't stop reading!!! You absolutely need to write more werewolf stories!!! You should do Nate and shawna's story, and Saul and Katrina's story, I would definitely read that. Just don't stop writing, I want to read more of your stories❤️

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE. You are extremely talented. Try to look up editor/publisher for Lara Adrian. Your writing is easy, smooth, and riveting. Must publish!!!

It was a beautiful story.

I loved this book, every chapter was well done! I've paid money for shorter and less rewarding books. You also gave yourself a way to write SO many more stories using the same world of characters. It reminds me of the Dark Series by Christine Feehan which is the highest compliment I can give you since she is my favorite paranormal romance writer. I sincerely hope you find a way to get published, maybe through Amazon for Kindle books? Best of luck to you and thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful story!!!!

this is so great of a story

I could not stop reading it once I started. I loved it . I'm excited to read more of you stories.

I don't know where to start. You are an incredibly talented writer. I loved this series. I read this series from beginning to end in a couple of days. During any free time I was reading, I had to know what happened next!!! I was hooked from the first paragraph. I love your characters, their interactions, their storylines. I loved everything!!! Thank you for sharing with us.

I got sucked in from the very beginning and had to force myself to stop reading and go to sleep. Then I woke up and started reading again. Very well written. Excellent storylines. Characters you can't help but love. Thanks you for writing this amazing story!

Was never an English major, but really loved this entire story! Thank you for taking the time to write it!

I am not one to criticize English grammar or spelling ,I could figure out what you meant and that was good enough for me . I had a great time reading the story and I thank you for hours of entertainment . Thank you for sharing with us .

Stephen J

loved how you 'mated' everyone. Strong story line, etc. I do have an issue with Elizabeth. Don't feel that she deserved the title of 'Madam Alpha' so soon...she was too arrogant and too egotistical. Taking care of the pack, nothing should be so beneath her as to be 'boring' and farmed out.

Didn't like how she challenged the Alpha in front of the pack, makes him look weak. Alpha status needs to be earned. Should have left her simply to be addressed as 'madam', til she earned her stripes, which she eventually did.

This is probably the third or fourth time I have read this story. I absolutely love it. You should honestly think of publishing it.

Fantastic story, every chapter.

i realy enjoyed your Story. it was not a simple Story but more like a saga with a whole Fantasy world created inside your talented brain. the Drama was breathtaking, espacialy the part in which she and dia got inside the witch house and she got shot multiple times. the Story was also very complex with many very different chars. 5 fat stars for that masterpiece of Story.

Your series is amazing! I literally could not stop reading this. It had just the right amount of plot, drama, feels to combine with the sex scenes to make it a 1000% better! I'm an author too, but I couldn't even begin to imagine being able to come up with something like this and put it together. Well done!

Just amazing - such an epic read that is quality (aside from the spelling/grammatical errors) from beginning to end. Wish you wrote more stories!

Outstanding! Amazing!! I loved this series. You are a very talented writer. I was hooked on the first chapter and had to read straight through to the end. This is the second time I have read this. I wish I could find my "mate." Great job.

loved every single chapter