All Comments on 'Bound to My Mate Ch. 20'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I LOVED this series!! I was hooked and couldn't stop reading. I hope you write more because you are so talented!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Nice

I couldn't stop reading now im sad its over

Lobosolo51Lobosolo51almost 8 years ago

My second time reading your story - just as good as the first time through - well done! I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Amazing!

I loved the series so much! Really enjoyed watching the characters develop through the chapters. Hoping for a sequel to Elizabeth and Joel's journey!!!

pixie71pixie71almost 8 years ago
love this story

i just love this story so much. you are such a great writer

ilovegibbsilovegibbsalmost 8 years ago
I love it!!!

I may have made a comment before, but I have to make one again. I love, love, love this series. I have read it more times than I can count. I fall in love with your characters every time. Such an incredible story. Thanks so much for sharing your amazing talent with us. Any chance of maybe adding a few more chapters??

tishangeltishangelover 7 years ago
Stayed up all night

I just stayed up all night to finish reading this story, I just could not walk away and come back to finish it. It had me hooked right from the start. You should copy this on paper and send it Harlequin to publish! Great read, your writing is right up there with some of my favorite writers from the Nocturne Series from Harlequin, and this story would fit right in with them.

AvidReader47AvidReader47over 7 years ago
Thanks again

I hope that you will write again sometime soon. Thanks for the enjoyable reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
You are awesome!

That was a fabulous story. You're very talented. I hope you get published!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
AAAAHHHHHHH

I KNOW ITS OVER BUT I WANT MORE THIS WIRLD WAS SO WELL CONSTRUCTED AND SO AMAZING I JUST LOVE IT I COULDNT STOP READING IT! THE CHARATERS WERE SO WELL DEVELOPED AND I JUST DKAJDJAJXNSKAMCND

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Thank you!

A very well written story with lots of plots and characters! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. I am in awe of your imagination to the point of thinking it all must be real and how do I join up! Thank you, Mike

Tor_Cha_1Tor_Cha_1over 7 years ago
Great Story

is there More to the Story??

Are there More Story's About this Pack??

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fourth Reading

This is the fourth time I have read this series and was just as enthralled as the first. You make it all come to life and I completely enjoyed It.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow!

I just finished reading the story and you seriously need to keep writing! This story still has so many directions it can go! You should be published asap!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sebastian

Maybe a new story about Sebastian and him finding a mate? Or About Will and Dia once they are back with Cedric?

ChasingtheSkyChasingtheSkyover 7 years ago

I have become completely enamoured with Joel and Elizabethand the pack!

I NEED to know about the Alpha's pups!

PLEASE give us more!

Inevitable_Inevitable_over 7 years ago

Amazing story. I really hope you find the time to continue writing again in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

This story is SOOOOO good, I've read it like 15 time (literally) and was wondering if you could add more, like few chapters on years later when they have pups, although don't change anything in the story it is just an amazing story overall, it's so good really great story DoctorWolf

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Fantastic story, I'm hooked for sure! I hope you'll write more soon about the alphas pups, continued life in the pack, etc. Don't leave us hanging! Lol

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago
OMGawd!!!

I want this in paperback form so I can dogear the pages that I want and read them over and over again. *sigh* I loved reading this and my hubby laughed as I in turn had frowns, giggled, laughed out loud, and just grinned stupidly while I read. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing your wonderful gift with us! Paranormal erotic romance/mystery is probably my fav genre! Please keep writing and maybe there can eventually be a sequel? 😺😽😸

rml65rml65over 7 years ago
Wow!!

I am just getting into reading the nonhuman stories on here and was lucky enough to find this story! I think your story was amazing and your writing was outstanding! I truly hope you decide to write more you have a gift for it. Thank you for sharing it with all of us on here!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

please please please continue this series.. you could probably do 60 or more chapters each 4 pages long with this series and still have tons of room to do more chapters.

Vampera313Vampera313about 7 years ago

I fell in love with this story! You should right this story into a book ,it is that good.I wish you could right a sequel, I think that would be awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wow!

I stumbled across your two stories some days ago and have read them beginning to end. I hope that once you're done with primary childrearing, you'll return to writing. These stories are wonderful!

The_Crazy_OneThe_Crazy_Oneabout 7 years ago

Just read this series over a three day time frame, wow. Well written and thought out. I hope there is more coming from Doctor Wolf.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
PLEASE COME BACK

I hope you are checking back in to see how wildly popular your writing has become. I binge read BTMM in one day and look forward to rereading it again at leisure. I only do this with my absolute favorites. As much as I hope you find raising your children fulfilling I still selfishly wish you could find time to bless us with more of your talent. Like previous comments pointed out... There are whole books worth of material here just waiting for you to bring life to. I hope you find encouragement in the HUNDREDS of votes and comments.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Bravo!

Worth the time to read. From first page to the end, thouroughly entertained. I laughed. I cheered. Loved the verity of strong characters!

Now going to read your other story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
General comment

You wrote a good story. Hopefully you will write another.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Damn it. What an awesome story. Please keep going. I would love to read some more storys like this one 😃

Lots of love ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow!

Just finished a Marathon read of both stories. More!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Phenomenal! You should write about her estrous as well ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Great storyline! Your imagination is addictive and I enjoyed each chapter. Keep up the good work.

hazeleys34hazeleys34almost 7 years ago
Great story

I loved this story, and it's definitely on my favorite list

Jc0147258369Jc0147258369almost 7 years ago
Absolutely enthralling

I don't frequent this site, and when I do visit I generally do not go for the non human stories. Every once in a while, I look for a centaur story and usually skip werewolves/vampires as to me they are all pretty cliche (just an opinion).

This adventure far and away exceeded my expectations!! I couldn't put my phone down, and I have been reading it non stop in between work emails and regular life. This has never happened to me on this site, and I wanted to tell you that you have an amazing talent for both writing and storytelling. This was an enthralling adventure from start to end, with twists and turns that keep even the most jaded reader hooked.

Well done, and I am now going to stalk everything else you may have written!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing!

This is by far my favorite story! I love this because it is so unlike any other werewolf story I've ever read. For the past two days this is all I have been able to think about, and it's driven me wild! You have great writing skills, and a wonderful imagination. Thank you!

ChasingtheSkyChasingtheSkyover 6 years ago
More!

I would love to read more about Joel and Elizabeth and any pups they would have. More about the "new" wolves, please!

Ackgrl78Ackgrl78over 6 years ago
More, Please

I would love to read about if Joel and Elizabeth have had babies and what has happened with the rest of the pack. I really loved this story and I never wanted it to end. ❤

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Awasame story!

I really(REALLY) enjoy this story.Hope you will continue sometilme in the future with the a story series of another Pack member and his mate.If I may sujest:)I beleive another awasame story will be about Alpha Sebastian Germain and the disappearance of his mate.Looking forward for any new story of yours!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A wonderful story

I absolutely loved reading your story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I hope everything is going well for you! I love both of your stories and I think it would be amazing if you would come back and write some more, but only if you really feel like it. I keep coming back to reread it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Moreeeeeee

I want more please. And more about the new wolves.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 6 years ago
Just keep having to come back to this great story

This was one of my first PNR stories back when you initially posted it, and Madame Doc, it's still one of the best. The secondary characters have lovely stories of their own making the whole tale a rich tapestry. Please count me in as one who would love to read the further adventures of Pack Latro. I keep checking back in hope.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
more, please

i think there are a couple of more chapters in this story, pity to end it yet

be great to see where the pack & couples evolve into families enriching the packs lives

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing!!

You have such a talent!! Everytime I grab my phone, I find myself reading this wonderful story! I agree with the others, there is still more to this story. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
amazing

This whole story is amazing and I keep hoping there will be more one day

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Great story! I just read it all, and I love it. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
ok...

Love it overall except dont particularly like the,way u let Elizabeth forget about her family too easily, and forgive Joel too easily. its as if her fanily is less important than hers.i now see why u made ger dad a drunk so.he cud,be easily wriiten off.

BhebheBhebhealmost 6 years ago
One of my favorites...

I don't know how many times I've read these stories and still not done with it, I really loved it from the beginning to the end I just hope you continue to make more because there's so much more to tell to these... Looking forward for the continuation or a sequel please.. thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This story

Great story I love your work and wish you would write a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yaaas

This story is amazing please please continue! I want them to have pups and travel to different packs!! Amazing writing

ilovegibbsilovegibbsover 5 years ago
Awesome story!!!

I may have commented before, but I have to comment again. This series is freaking awesome!!! I have read it multiple times over the last few years, and I fall in love with it and the characters each time. I just get drawn into their lives and they feel like old friends. It's just amazing!! You are so talented. Please keep writing!! Maybe Will and Dia's story, Rick and April? All the newly mated couples? Oh Lucas and June!! Or how about them bringing new pups into the pack??? Just incredible!!!! Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

MABGMABGover 5 years ago
Enthralled

I am in love with this story. You did an amazing job with both of your stories. Thanks so much for sharing it with us!

TheGirlOfYourWetDreamsTheGirlOfYourWetDreamsover 5 years ago
Re-Reader because you deserve it ❤

I love, love, love,love and just simply love your work! I always come again and again and again to read the story. I have no words more than these to express how much I adore your work! I specially made my literotica account so that I can follow you. ❤❤❤ (Yes you are my first author I have given a follow to!! :-) )

Lots of Love and Best Wishes,

TheGirlOfYourWetDreams

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A series maybe?

I'd personally read every story written about everyone else here. I hate prequels because I'm weird. But I'd even read a story about Joel's parents and so on. Domick, was such an ass. I feel like his shenanigans would have been hilarious. I fell in love with everyone and I couldn't stop reading. The closer I got to chapter 20 the more excited I was. But i didn't want to because I'm a greedy reader. I'm years late to this story. I think I enjoyed watching your writing improve as you went. The comments are equally entertaining.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623about 5 years ago
2nd time Read

I just had to read again! I loved it the first time and I loved it this time! Please continue to write, you have such a great story telling ability!!!

LiterKnightLiterKnightabout 5 years ago

Excellent story. Very sad to see the end of it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Love the story.

You are such a good story teller. Maybe more of the story about there children or the other couples and there lives. Meeting other packs or the other packs coming to introduce the other women

Jcl6845Jcl6845almost 5 years ago

I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed your series. Please keep writing. I look forward to more stories.

WolffishWolffishalmost 5 years ago
Pity it's ended

So loved this story.

JulielleJuliellealmost 5 years ago
🦄

You did a beautiful job. Thankyou

Soonersniper42Soonersniper42over 4 years ago
Outstanding!

I have love this series so much! It’s so enjoyable you did a great job! Looking forward and hopeful for more in the future

ausvirgoausvirgoover 4 years ago
Keep writing please.

Okay, I know that family comes first, so I'll try to be patient.

At Least I've got "A Slave to the Servants" to look forward to, and it's nearly twice as long as this one. I'm going to have to wait a while before starting though, because tha wife is still annyoed at me for staying up late reading this story. As I've said, your writing is dangerously addictive!

I'm hoping that you've got a new story laid out waiting for you to get a chance to write again.

Thanks for a great story, and a really good finish. 😘

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Brest writting

Just love your writting... great stories! Jeep writting!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thoroughly enjoyable series- hope you write more someday

Thank you for writing and sharing your writing

I found the story engaging especially since it is a different werewolf story type, and due to the inclusion of we’re history

I do hope you write furthe in the future

All the very best

CRW

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Change my life

I loved reading this, it awakened interests in me I never knew I even had. I am In love With it and I really hope yoh continue on in similar stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
bittersweet

I really loved reading this series, it was really refreshing and fascinating. I loved the character development as well as the plot, there was never any dull moment. Thank you for sharing and I hope you continue to write more stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Awesome series

I absolutely LOVED this series. You made me feel like I was there ; that I was part of the pack. Thank you. You are an amazing writer. I look forward to reading more rom you.

Katie12Katie12over 4 years ago
Amazing story

Loved this series so so much. The storyline was well thought out and it was a great read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hats off to the author

To be honest, I don't normally look for longer stories in here when i... need to read something (for I am sure everyone knows the reason ;) ). However, I very much enjoy "tickling"/erotic romance, all the more set in supernatural or fantasy-like environement or such characters.

The story was easy to read and the plot was very well thought off. I loved the changes from erotic to non-erotic scenes and the story development that intertwined them.

To sum up, it was a true privilege to read this story. And for free? Oh, I am grateful from the very bottom of my heart. If you ever publish a hardcover, I WANT it. Even now, I would make it one of my top 3 favourite books... and I am not sure the other two would best this one.

Really, Thank you.

WarmScentWarmScentover 4 years ago
Hats off to the author 2

And one more thing. In case anyone would like to try, listen to this musis while reading, I found it very fit to the topic and enjoyed it all the more.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XrisCsNzOlo&t=604s

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More please

Awesome novel, cant wait for more... maybe about this pack?

KemlinDianaMedusaKemlinDianaMedusaalmost 4 years ago
Fabulous story!

This was such a great story; great characters, great development, fabulous storyline and so engaging! I really hope you come back and write more - the next chapter in this series. (Please!) 🤞🏾🙏🏾

Of all the stories I have read here, this is by far my favourite! And I’d love to read more!

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
This was amazing!

I dont normally take the time to read stories this long but im certainly glad i did. This felt like a real book that i couldn't stop reading. I think you could be missing your calling as a supernatural genre romance novelist. I would be hooked instantly. This was extremely well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wow!

I’m not into Twilight or supernatural fiction. At all. But I do love romantic erotica. This was truly my absolute FAVORITE story on this site. I read it in 2 days. I was obsessed and couldn’t wait to read more. I’m actually so sad that it’s the end.

You told an amazing story and the right amount of erotica. Perfection.

Horseman68Horseman68over 3 years ago
Exceptional Story and Writer - Please Come Back.

Wow. The number of praising comments for this story whose author has not published on the site for eight years. Must be a message there! As stated before this genre is not really my usual, but as here quality and talent always win out. Thank you for this story, and hope to enjoy more of your work as your life permits. Many bravos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Fantastic. Please make more

I read this back to back 3 times. Its a fantastic story and hope you make more of it.

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Brilliant

Little more to be said really that has not already been said. 5 stars throughout the 20 chapters.

MickeyKMickeyKover 3 years ago

You got ME hooked!

5 stars EVERY story!!! You’ve deserved those red H’s Honey!!! I can’t WAIT to read more!! I went to your favorites and I’ve already seen SEVERAL I wanna read!!! There was a story I read awhile before yours but for some reason I lost ALL my favorite stories and authors and I can’t recall ALL of them and have been TRYING to find as many as I can but I CAN’T find the wolf story!!! But I found YOU which has put my search on hold for the moment but I’m SO HAPPY I found YOU!!! Just WISH I could the OTHER as well!! It’s one I’d LOVE to reread!!! But I guess I’ll read some others until I can HOPEFULLY find the one I’ve been UNSUCCESSFULLY searching for!!!🤬 KEEP WRITING!!! YOU’RE A NATURAL and A GREAT GIFT!!!

Katmoon19854416Katmoon19854416over 3 years ago

I loved your story. I read the story from the beginning to the very end.

TravelerinmdTravelerinmdover 3 years ago

Awesome story. Thank you for sharing your talents.

LNJones34LNJones34over 3 years ago

What a story! I enjoyed every single page and paragraph! I see this is your first story, and it was fantastic.

You updated your profile about 4 years ago and said that you were expecting your 2nd child and that your

work was keeping you busy. I was once a working mother so I can understand that you have a job and a

family that comes first. I can only hope that someday you will find the time to continue writing and that I will

be lucky enough to find and enjoy more of your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

so amazing do continue writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

So so good! I couldn't stop reading it. You should consider publishing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I read this story years ago and just read it again. I loved it all over again. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I couldn’t stop reading - literally had to force myself to go to bed. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I have paid good money for books that were not nearly on par with this book. Please keep writing and seek a publisher!! Thank you for sharing such a wonderous world with us all.

jester4932jester4932almost 3 years ago

Will there be more? Please say yes

wish_thinkerwish_thinkeralmost 3 years ago

Loved it, really enjoyable! While I like long stories, novellas, this one could have benefited from some editing and proof reading, but wait, you say this was your first? Had to belive! I hope to read much more from your talent!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please just make this into a full book series!! I have never been more invested!

FroseFrosealmost 3 years ago

DoctorWolf, I finished this story in one day, I couldn't put it down. Publish it, it's way better than half werewolf romances there are out there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story, I couldn't put it down! I would love to read more about them.

Sassybutterfly99Sassybutterfly99almost 3 years ago

Another awesome story!! I hope you share more ❤️❤️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Relatively new to the site, but this was the best one I have read. I appreciated the coherent narrative structure, a cohesive plot, and dynamic and complex characters. I appreciated diversification in diction and that the story didn't overly rely on clichéd tropes.

I really appreciated sensing the female voice behind the narration. (Not just a nominally "female" narrator, but a female narration.) I appreciated that thuis was clearly edited and proofread prior to publication and that it observes grammar and spelling norms. Also, I truly appreciate that you finished it!

(Although..​I would have

read on, had there been more. :) )

jhuskey56jhuskey56over 2 years ago

Great story plot, great characters, and great potential for a published series. I see a successful future for you in fiction writing, if not already. I look forward to reading your other work here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was a very exciting and captivating story. I look forward to more from you in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please come back and write another story. You are so talented!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I keep coming back and rereading these stories once Ive forgotten most of the details.

This story is so special, this time it took me less than 3 days to read through it. Weirdly, it was more special this time for me, than it was 10 years ago. I wish there was more of it, I wish there was a TV series made after this.

Oh the emotions... The love..

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

One of the best werewolf stories I've ever read! You are amazing

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i just finished ready this entire story in one sitting and it was absolutely PHENOMENAL! probably the best story i’ve found on here, i simply couldn’t put it down!

Vixen00Vixen00over 2 years ago

My second, maybe third time reading this series. You are a talented writer. I wish you would expand on this world. I know I would read faithfully. And from the comments, I'm not the only one. Fantastic work! Thank you.

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