Broken Valentines

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"He would just slam that little packer of his in and hump away for 5 or so minute, cum and be done!" he was laughing as he said this, but Rachael wasn't because what he was saying was true of her ex-boyfriend. He now had the head up between her still raised thighs allowing her to see and fell its length and thickness,

"But I'm not going to do that, I want you to need me to put it in." He let her legs fall around he as he starched out between then his head amid her thighs. "It looks sweet enough to eat..." he made one long pass from the bottom of her anus to her tip of her clit. Rachael shuttered from this. So Atreyu did it once more then started on each lip, up one down the other. Licking, sucking as he every so often dipped his tongue into her and then would do the long pass from bottom to top. As he worked her over she couldn't help but to moan. Rachael prayed she wasn't too loud as she held him in place with her hand and vice like thigh. He did this until he felt her start to shake even more and as she came for the first time he sealed his lips to her pussy so as not to lose a drop. When she finally let go of he got up and went over to a cabinet. Rachael watched him through dazed eyes, the way the light from the moon fell over him caused the brown and red of his black hair to shimmer as he look through the cupboard.

"What are you doing?" she asked once she found the strength to set up.

"I'm looking for a flavor to match your." The stumped her for a minute, he turned and smiled at her. With the way the hair fall over his face she couldn't help but smile back as the thought came to mind 'He's like a bunny!'. He walked back over to her and set down, in his hand was a yellow lollipop. "What's that for?"

"It to add to your flavor."

"What you trying to say I tasted bad?" to this he didn't answer he just bushed the hair from his face allowing the light to bring his eyes to life as he kissed her. It was a first for Rachael she had never tasted herself before, and was kind of shocked by the slight salty taste.

"No you don't taste bad at all I just like to add to your sweetness." He then unwrapped the lollipop and placed it on her mouth, "Have a taste!" Rachael could smell it's almost over powering sweetness but once she tasted it she was surprised it simple sour honey-like flavor. "Can you tell what the flavors of it are?" she shook her head as he slipped it from her mouth, "Its honeysuckle and lemon. Now lots see if I made the correct chose!" he gently forced her back down onto the bed and inch along her till he was back between her thighs. After making sure it was wet Atreyu ran the lollipop the length of her lips stopping at the top to coat her clit and at the base to enter her. He made four or five pass and then brought the lollipop back up to Rachael mouth as his tongue returned to her pussy. She found herself surprised once more at how the flavor of the lollie complemented hers. He ran his tongue up and down at her clit he would take it between his lips and buzz his lips causing sparks of electricity to flow through her. At this her pussy would wink and twitch as the muscles tightened and relaxed, once she loss the taste of the pop he would remove it from her mouth and give her a few more coats and start again. Rachael was on Cloud 9, she had heard stories about what kind of sexual partner Atreyu was but figured it was all hype. "You're so close! Should I let you cum again?" he was now kneeling up between her legs rubbing her pussy lips between his forefingers and thumbs. She was breathing heavy and could barely speak.

"Please Trey... I want to feel you!" she whined, Atreyu smiled softy as she had called him by his childhood nickname. He slowly climbed up her body using his left hand to support his weight and his right to play with her as he inched his knees up until she had her thighs resting on his. She could feel the large sponge head of his cock against her lips, "Are you wearing a rubber?"

"Always" he then at a snail's pace crawled into her. Rachael hadn't seen his cock but the way the head felt as it was going in scared her slightly. It was as if someone was pushing a soda can into her. "Calm down Tink, the heads almost in." he lightly held her face in between his long slander fingers. Then the head was in and the rest just slide along. They stayed like that for what seemed like an eternity her feeling full and he feeling the tightness of her white hot velvet love glove. Then bit by bit they gained a comfortable rhythm, slow and steady. The only sounds were of her moans. Atreyu made no sounds as he tenderly fucked his childhood friend. As the light caught his eyes they sparkled like the gems they shared color with.

"Not so little anymore huh?" he asked as he smiled down at her, she wrapped her legs around his waist as he set up.

"Umm it's so much bigger then it was then." He placed his long slander fingers on her skin again his eyes glinted in the dime moon light so to did their warm moist skin. Rachael noticed the metallic twinkle of his dagger sharp finger nails traced invisible lines over her upper body. The whole time steadily gently thrusting into her,

"Did you know that during sexual intercourse or any kind of sexual stimulation, that the nerve ending of the skin become hyper sensitive." He was drawing the fine points of his nails across the surface of her soft creamy flash.

"Oh god, Oh god, Oh god!" Atreyu had taken her left nipple in his mouth and worked it with his teeth and tongue, then moved to the right. The whole while his thrusts growing stronger as his fingers moved farther down her body. Till his fingers where manipulating her clit and pussy lips. Rachael's felt her body react to Atreyu's attacks and in response tore into his back as he kissed her, nail sinking in drawing blood. Then it was as if the bubble that had formed in her lower stomach popped releasing white hot fluid that raced though her body, the last thing she saw was Atreyu setting in the moonlight at his desk watching her. And then darkness as sleep stole her.

"You'll be here in 45? Yeah everything is in order." Atreyu stood outside Caria's room. Like his Caria bed set under the window so when he entered he felt his breath caught. The night shirt she had been wearing had come unbuttoned, even though she was 18 she still had a childlike body, but that was part of what he loved about her. Like him she had not inherited their Siddi mother's looks, she had only taking there mother's height and beautiful smile, like Atreyu she had received her looks from her Anglo- Indian father. From her butter pecan skin, longs cinnamon brown hair to her teal eyes. She looked nothing like her older brother who looked like his late father. The only thing Atreyu had inherited from his mother was the soft shape of his eyes other then that he got everything else from his Black Native American/Creole-Gypsy late father. The garnet eyes, the silky auburn/black hair to the rich caramel skin.

"We look nothing alike, we sound nothing alike... yet we're blood." He whispered no longer a needing to hide his Creole accent. He knelt by the bed and pull the covers till she was coved, "You know baby girl... I wasn't joking before. You really have no idea how much I truly love you." He reached into his pocket and pulled out two rings and slipped one on her left ring finger and the other on his. The bands were made of white gold, and they were laced with amethyst and moonstone gems all the way around. The stones on hers cut to resemble hearts. With that he lead forward and lightly kissed her,

"Please wait for me! As long as you have that ring I'll away be with you." These where the last words Caria heard from him and she whispered,

"Happy birthday big brother and thanks for V-day gifts." as he disappeared from her room...

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You've been watching too much Anime

The story does not reflect the way this world works. The basic plot is not terrible, but the details that support makes the storyline come across as juvenile. The writing is atrocious and makes a loose plot even more incomprehensible. My seventh grade English teacher would have graded this a D.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
So you want to know if your writing has improved

One paragraph begins:<p>No one show hide or hair of Atreyu or the other twenty students for the raise of the week.<p>Now, read that and tell me if it's even literate. I mean, did you write worse than that in high school? And that's just one example.<p>If you want to keep writing, you'll need an editor. I mean, a serious editor, someone who won't be afraid to tell you what sucks and what doesn't.

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