by FurryFury
A great theme for a fantasy, and the pack of ravenous other girls at the end, rougher, wilder than the guests is just so sadistically wonderfull. Nice job Fury.
Thank you for your public comment! I love it when others enjoy my words! It truly makes me happy to hear from you that you did! You have officially made my day, which wasn't going well at all!
Thank you again!
Fury
I can honestly say that I have never read anything like that before. It was actually a very good short story.
Thank you Saw_Man1!
I'm so glad you liked my fantasy turned story! It makes me happy that you think it was a very good short story.
*grins*
Thanks for your public comment,
Fury
A tasty little story that was imaginative and well written
Thanks so much Mad Lews!
I'm glad you found my lil buffet tasty!
*smiles*
Fury
Nicely done lass, another room done, can't wait for more of your abduction stories here.... The Daddy Room I told you before I enjoyed an this adds to the House..... Love the architecture here an kudos to the Interior Designer.... Gods what a mind you have lass... Long have I known of the erogenous zone most often overlooked by My errr "gender peers" and as always again 'tis borne out by a woman
pax
HL
I'm so glad you enjoyed this little room in my sadistic abduction warehouse!
Thanks for your public comment!
*smiles*
Fury
How are you able to thank reviewers when you can't see the reviews?
I don't know what makes you think I can't see the public comments. I can see them, as can anyone. Therefore I do thank people who comment on my stories as a matter of courtesy and genuine thanks for taking that time to send a comment.
Thank you for you question / comment,
Fury
Difficult and unique way to present an idea. Love it! Though, it is too short. I want some more >:}
I am honored that you stopped by and left a public comment!
I'm glad you liked the story, as short as it is. I rewrote this from another POV in the Fury's Filthy Story thread, which you probably know is a LOT longer.
It's been a while since I've checked for comment on my stories! What a thrill to see you took the time to read my story and leave one!
*kiss*
Fury
I like this exhibitionism n people coming n pinching nipples n touching other body parts. It always makes me hot. I liked the story except for the part where the girl is kept hungry. That part was like a bucket of cold water. It removed any little erotic feeling i was beginning to get. Please don't write such things which only make us feel bad abt the girl. Make us feel like she is such a lucky girl n i wish i was in her place. But overall a good attempt at writing an erotic story. Keep it up! :-)
I found this, by the way, after reading a posting of yours in the forum. What an imaginative fantasy! Who would have thought - food everyone and not a bite for me. And at the end? Oh what a scene to suggest being disheartened, humiliated, and cheated by others just like herself. I have to hand it to you. You painted quite a picture with very few words.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story in part. I'm sorry that you were left cold but it's my fantasy that I wrote. It turned me on, so that's how I wrote it. Thanks for taking the time to let my know how you felt about the story.
I'm so glad you enjoyed my twisted little fantasy. It's great to see others can enjoy what once was my secret guilty thoughts.