All Comments on 'Cecelia Ch. 04'

It's not what I expected to happen, which is good. I like it when the twists in a story are not predictable. I look forward to Michael's continuing adventures.

The story is exciting and well told, though we don't get to know Michael and Cecilia very well. The style is often good, but go easy on the use of señorita for young woman. The ending is strange, but I guess we chapter five will develop it further.

Nicely paced, as the hero of your story gets in deeper and deeper. Out of the frying pan into the fire? So what happens to him next?

Can't wait for the next part!

Man!

You should write mor stories please

Repetitive and boring.