All Comments on 'C'est La Vie Ch. 02'

by Black_Hat_Lee

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fridayamfridayamalmost 13 years ago
Intruiging

and well written. I look forward to more.

Sidney43Sidney43almost 13 years ago
Good start

It seems likely that Melissa has set up Amy to be found this way to prove to Michael that he is making a mistake forsaking her for Amy. However, this is just conjecture, so I look forward to the next chapter. It is a bit unclear why Amy would be in Michael's apt and bed, since he clearly was not expecting her to be there?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
taking the bait

regarding the last comment about being set up she still didn't have to take the bait unless she thought she wouldn't get caught.

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