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XxXJODYXxXXxXJODYXxXover 12 years agoAuthor
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Although these chapters are small the second chapter has taken a little longer. ThanX for waiting. Hope you all enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it! Susie learns some valuable life lessons (wink) in Ch. 02: Who Do You Belong To?

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SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53over 12 years ago
Very good

A good beginning to what can be an excellent storyline.

sftoyousftoyouover 12 years ago

Great start! Please continue :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great start

A very nice read, how about another chapter, seems mr Torres has some very specific plans for Suzie, like to know just WHAT plans.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

MORE,MORE ,MORE

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