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Relieved, Tiffany didn't even nibble at Aunt Eva's baiting. Tiffany smiled from ear to ear and pleasantly thanked Aunt Eva with a secret delight, "Thank you so much for everything. You have given me more than you will ever know."
Jack, sensing a potential flare up in the battle, turned to Eva and barked, "Shut up Eva. Quit being such a bitch." He looked down at her outfit and barked, "Change into a skirt and take off that silly hat. You are an embarrassment. "
Eva just stared up at him in disbelief as if she had just been slapped. Her mouth moved as if she was fighting back but no sounds came out. Frustrated, Eva looked down at her hands and left the room without another word.
As she shut the door, she looked back at her husband glaring at her. Standing close beside him, Tiffany was smiling at her while she wrapped her arm around Jack's waist. Her niece leaned her body against her husband like a happy couple saying goodbye to their last guest.
Embarrassed by his wife's demented behavior and fueled by the morning's activities, Jack's orders grew stronger. With a blistering tone, he yelled after her, "Get ready now and stop acting like an idiot. What is wrong with you? You have been so nasty to Tiffany since she arrived. You need to go see a doctor on Monday before someone knocks you flat on your ass."
Eva closed the door. Jack quickly volunteered to escort Tiffany to the lobby and helped Tiffany with her bags to the elevator. When the elevator door shut behind them, Tiffany turned to her Uncle, "And thank you for a wonderful time in Chicago but especially for this morning. You were wonderful in more ways than one."
Tiffany changed to a serious tone while gesturing towards the apartment, "What are you going to do with her?"
"Obviously, we have some problems. I need to work on her. I didn't realize how sick she was or how much I was putting up with from her. She still needs my help, but I won't continue to sell my soul."
With those words, she pressed the lobby button, stretched up and kissed him. It was a slow sensual kiss that promised more if they had the time. Pulling her against him, he leaned against the wall and cupped his hand over her firm breast hidden in her dress. With her arms around his neck, Tiffany let her uncle lift up her dress and fondle her smooth ass during their embrace. It felt good. The kiss lasted 13 floors and when the elevator door opened, Jack had to hide his excitement.
As they exited the elevator, Jack leaned over and whispered to his niece, "If you need a place to stay again, you are always welcome here."
"I bet I am but remember, after today, nothing happened between us. Nothing."
He whispered back, "Yes, but I'll never forget it."
The empty commuter van was waiting out front so she knew she had a long trip to pick up other customers. With his arm around her, her uncle escorted her to the van, said good bye and she crawled into the back of the van. As the driver loaded her bags in the back, Tiffany sat down and turned to her uncle. She slid her dress high on her thighs while she parted her knees. Her tender thighs and blonde pussy was fully exposed for her uncle's pleasure. He stared between her legs until she giggled, pulled down her dress and blew him a kiss.
The van driver closed the door and drove off. Jack waved good bye as his dream girl returned to New Orleans to rebuild her life.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 12 years agoDon't listen to those who would police your writing, probably mostly out of jealousy. It is one of the best written on the site, if not thee best written, that I have read so far. I am an English teacher and I say that they should lighten up with the unsolicited red pen advice. This is Literotica people! If you want to chastise writing styles, pick apart the newspapers!
Never let haters take anything away from you!
lormahoykyd2007over 14 years agoI loved the story. I would be no means second guess the authors intentions or his right to have his story end as he sees fit, but I am contemplating writing an alternate ending to the story if nothing else than to see what kind of reaction it gets and see if people liked my take on it.
jackal_manover 15 years agoDespite some minor faults (the occasional spelling or formatting error), I haven't enjoyed a story quite like this for a long time. The amount of teasing and build-up lent itself well to the story's length, especially considering the climax at the end. The sex itself was written with just the right amount of detail, making for a very enjoyable read.<br><br>I did have a few concerns, although they did not factor into my enjoyment. The Aunt--while seemingly troubled by OCD and chronic unappreciative...ness--seemed very one-dimensional. In any kind of story, it's nice to see villains with a deeper side to their motives. I found myself wondering what caused her to become such a bitch. The fact that this wasn't really addressed seemed to be short-changing the character.<br><br>In addition, I think while the Hurricane Katrina premise set the stage for the story very well, at times it did get bogged down on itself and detracted from the fact that this was an erotic story. As you well know, Katrina was a big disaster, and the downtime in the story that was spent on Katrina seemed to distract and take away from the rest of the work.<br><br>Overall, the story did have its moments, and it did keep me reading. It wasn't without its flaws, but it does demonstrate your ability to weave a story while keeping the reader interested.
Anonymousover 15 years agoPotential? Yes. Well written? No. A half done job. Editing would cut half the words and leave you with a terrific story. Why settle for less when you don't have to?
