All Comments on 'Christmas Cups'

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hotlead1hotlead1about 11 years ago
I didn't enjoy this one as much.

I'm not quite sure why yet, but this one just didn't do it for me. Not that I thought it was poorly done or anything. I'll have to read it again later and see if I'm missing something. Thanks, as always.

TheJohnsonator05TheJohnsonator05about 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thank you, I greatly appreciate your feedback. This story didn't turn out as I had expected. I had started it months ago and had intended it to be just about Brittney and Jeff, but after introducing Jack and Jessica, I decided to add them in to get readers to be more familiar with them before their series is started.

Can't win 'em all I suppose.

brian358brian358about 11 years ago
Thanks!

Thanks very much for the latest chapter.

I'm enjoying your stories. I enjoyed this one too, but perhaps it was missing something...

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It has been a long time since I last updated this. Since then I have done a lot of writing with no intent to submit, at least not yet. I have dug up some old ideas that I have long forgotten. One of them is a prequel of sorts to both Competition Cups and North Valley High. It'...