by TheJohnsonator05
I'm not quite sure why yet, but this one just didn't do it for me. Not that I thought it was poorly done or anything. I'll have to read it again later and see if I'm missing something. Thanks, as always.
Thank you, I greatly appreciate your feedback. This story didn't turn out as I had expected. I had started it months ago and had intended it to be just about Brittney and Jeff, but after introducing Jack and Jessica, I decided to add them in to get readers to be more familiar with them before their series is started.
Can't win 'em all I suppose.
Thanks very much for the latest chapter.
I'm enjoying your stories. I enjoyed this one too, but perhaps it was missing something...