All Comments on 'Cindy: The Professor's Bane Ch. 01'

These are great characters. I love the arrogant professor slipping under the spell of the sweet little coed... fighting it all the way. She is a ruthless prototype of adorable femininity and cold authority. Her playful manner is what gets me. And... good lord- When She called him "jerk-squirter", I had to use my sperm bucket. Just lovely. Keep this story evolving.

Outstanding! Love that it was deep and good length. Very

good character development. From the delicious, femme

fatale Cindy to the smary professor.

We need more stories where women are in control of the situation!

*evil laugh*

cant wait for the next installment, it might be your first story MLyons, but i hope it will not be your last.

MLyons, terrific story, well drawn characters, very hot dialogue and action and a pace that keeps us reading and wanting more. I'm predicting Cindy becomes a Lit heroine with her own fan club! Cheers 'rain.

That's not what teaching college environments, professors, or grants look like. The entire background setup is unrealistic. The actual start of the blackmail situation is also totally unbelievable. As for the writing, it is uneven and flat. Descriptions and expressions are repeated (Cindy "cowering", professor "bitterly" saying this or that) and the storytelling is awkward. This is a trite plot and it's not done in any particularly appealing way.

I think this well-written, and a refreshing change from some crap on here. One crib:

That second sentence of the prologue is one hell of a mouthful of 50 words length.

Honest to God, this may be the hottest story on Literotica, and that's saying something. Absolutely unbelievable.

You have captured his helplessness perfectly. I shall now press on to Ch.02

A well deserved 5*

I quitr liked the story but I found it offensive when you kept on using the words cunt and twat

very hot story. I wll have to read the next chapter

Is your first name Megan

Nope. MLyons is short for Mike Lyons, but that's not my real name either.... Thanks to everyone for reading. :)

What a wonderful character you have written here in Cindy young Lyons. I like Her a lot! I know this story was submitted an incredibly long time ago, I hope You are still around to enjoy our praise. Thank you so much for your efforts. Can't wait to read the final two chapters.