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Anna looked at her husband. "Fuck, closed doors, another family rule shot to hell.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoDidn't like the violence. Needed Anna to be more clever than bully. Incest at the end was too convenient - not plausible as the earlier scenes. Don't get me wrong, it worked, but seemed like you labored to finish the story. Needed a little more editing.
Really a nice story idea. Lots of fertile territory. Needed a consistent tie with golf. That kinda got lost in the second half.
Thanks.
