by AlexisPeignoir
Was there more to this story that I missed? Why did he leave her, what were her 'terms'?
What we have is a nice, short erotic coupling, with no back story at all. So the writing was good, the story read as a fragment.
Alexis, I do enjoy your smart, intuitive and sexy leading lady who knows what (and who it would appear) she wants and how to get it (and him). The lucky boy never stood a chance.....thank you Alexis..
I certainly enjoyed this intriguing snippet of a tale. You've stimulated my imagination as well as my libido. A fragment indeed, which can lead in so many different and delightful directions, a spiders web, watch out don't get caught. Thank you Ms Spider.