All Comments on 'Committed Ch. 02'

May he die unpleasantly

domination fantasies can be hot!

Great stuff, Ryles. "Keep up" the good work.

in a very erotic manner and the author wrote it powerfully that it wasn't sleazy or cheap at all. It has that dark element like Hannibal Lecter's story.

Good work there FwR. Wish to read more.

A truly erotic tale that almost makes me feel guilty for enjoying it.

A tale that can stimulate the mind.....and not in just that wicked way either....very nice work, Ryleigh.

Wow, Ryles, that was hotter than the first one. Logan is one crazyass motherfucker, but his treatment of Adena is turning me on. So crazy, yet so tender. Can't wait for part 3!

nice J

...are corrupting me! And I like it! Hot baby, very hot and very disturbing.

This is leaps and bounds ahead of chapter 1. I've really been drawn in by this one.

This is leaps and bounds ahead of chapter 1. I've really been drawn in by this one.

So very well done and enjoyable even if the domination, non-consent theme is not my favorite I still appreciate good writing

Really enjoying the story but if he made her "ready" for him before fucking her for the first time, there wouldn't be any blood. The hymen isn't a barrier blocking the vagina or something that goes away, it stretches and if a women isn't wet when she's entered, it can tear which causes the bleeding. Super commen misconception but took away a little from the story.