by Andy5v
I like the concept but at times the missing, mis-spelt and wrong words make it hard work
Hello. I would like to tell you that your stories are really very entertaining and i would like you to continue writing more stories. Thanks
Too damn many typos.
What the hell, man?
Was your hand down your pants the entire time you were
typing this?
Some small problems interfere with the story.
Josh goes to visit Jane Harper and halfway through their session, she becomes Beth Harper, inexplicably.
An organism is not an orgasm.
Other than that, a good concept.