All Comments on 'Coveting Ch. 07'

by Paris Waterman

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
starting to show development in characters here

the first 6 were your basic man fantasy swap stuff light on sex situations very soft porn with litle spice. this chapter has thrown in heat and emotion a 100 % jmprovment

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please keep this story moving forward!

Throughly enjoyed Ch. 1-7. I hope you will continue to develop the relationships between these two couples.

GizmorGizmorover 12 years ago
Coveting

Enjoying your story. Keep up the good work. Thanks.

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