by jasliz
Very interesting. But what about the guy that killed bobby? Did they kill him? Made me very very horny!
I really enjoyed the whole story, there were a few little mistakes with the names of some characters, however the overall I thought effect was amazing! but I have to ask, what happened with the Brody problem? I thought for sure you were going to resolve that.
But overall, an amazing story and GREAT detail!!! please keep up the good work!
I thought this was quite... unusual... but you put real effort into this whole series. It was soo hot, the detail and description you put into it.
One thing wrong with it, what happened with the conflict with Brody?
Damn this was some good reading!!!!!!!!!!! Ihave to say it again DAMN!!!!!!!!!!! this is some good reading!!!!!!!