by Lauries Husband
Nice chapter, good buildup to a climax. Looks like its Tamís time to enjoy the attentions of the team, wonder what each member will do. Also nice introduction of suzanne and Matt, can become good new storyline.
Now i dont know what to see first Dani or Tami's scenes
I adore this series, hope there's still more to cum. I especially like the unexpected twists, it never becomes predictable.
Keep up the good work.
Interesting to see another good twist in the series. Will Suzanne become a big character? As always a very good buildup.
I am still waiting for the mother to show up and show her daughter how it is done...would make for an interesting chapter.
The 1st time I read this, I liked it.
After some time as I was rereading it, I realized that he has ruined her career. That he has totally failed to protect her career from their fun.
The Koreans will never respect her ever again and the scene at the hotel with the lawyer's club is much the same.
Korean culture and US culture do not respect subs for their courage and strength. Instead, they see subs as sexual perverts and weak willed people. Since much of her future dealings with these 2 groups will depend on them respecting her strength, now that they see her as weak, they will try to "walk all over her" to get a better deal.
As far as I know [and only an expert on Korean sexual culture would know] the Koreans would be especially harsh in their judgment of her.
This is the 2nd time I have made this comment, the 1st seems to have been taken down. I guess that means the author is still around.
I enjoyed this story but you could of taken it further. You created interesting people but failed to make it "Dani's Story". You hinted throughout the story that maybe ALAN could learn from Dani and that everybody on his " team " was in awe of her! Take it the next step, she is smart, she got her weekend, and she is still their boss. Please write a sequel about Monday morning where Dani finds out she can and will be the ultimate boss! You can do it!
You really need to continue this tale. It has so much potential to become an epic ride for Dani. Promises of what she could become need to be fulfilled.