All Comments on 'Dark Desires: First Blood'

This is first rate! My pulse raced with each sentance and I wanted more until the very end. Bravo.

I only wish my own work could hold such thrall. Erotic and continually stimulating. Sensuality laced with the dark arts. Very very impressive.

The flow and color of your words complimented the story. Well woven. I look forward to more. ~ Imp

Your writting flowed so beautifully and artistically that I wish I could compose with nearly the skill. Please continue to write.

Shell shocked over here! Loved her suprise to him, what a great way to lose it eh? To a vampire gentleman, and make the first move instead of all those other cliche stories where he always impales her and takes control. GREAT ROLE REVERSAL! Damn that was some fine work. It gave me the giggles, I could just as easily imagine her saying "BOO" to him, for her unusual appearance and lustful request.

A Marvelous, Magnificient, Marvel!

A Splendid, Shocking, Suprise!

etc...

Only wish my first time will be so great. With a great guy too! ;)

I am now a fan! :)

Yours Truly,

Just someone trying to find meaning in my life

Cheers! =)