All Comments on 'Daughter Darkens Our World Ch. 02'

Now looking forward to chapter 3 and more of Candy

Thank you

Julie

I really liked both entries. I thought you had a couple of very interesting twists with the story. I could see dad sucking her lover (and customers???) cocks. Maybe mom goes black, perhaps sub, getting boob job, etc to make her look younger etc. You created interesting, somewhat atypical characters and then abandoned them. You owe it to your characters and yourself to continue. You have excellent scoring, which means folks really liked your work. Readership would grow substantially if you added some stories. See SilkstockingLover. Lots of IR, bi and gay stuff.

If you are still active on this page it would be great if you would write a third part, so that we can find out how it goes on and whether daddy has a plan