All Comments on 'Desires Unexpectedly Learned'

Was expecting the 2nd woman to be his wife and that you were the one romanced... ow well good story..got me hard and ready.

You do know how to write! And you do know how to build erotic tension. Good first effort. check your spelling and we can all use a voluteer editor. but keep writing.

Excellent buildup, simmering anticipation to searing-hot resolution.

Think you might take this adventure a little further. Interesting encounter.

NICE THOUGHT I enjoyed your story and still think the first woman was the object of his attention.His partner snared you and all enjoyed the results. Nice twist more careful editing and you have a winner

Such a very nice beginning to what I hope to be a series of chapters.....thanks for the fantasy.

I never leave comments, but this was fabulous. This one I'll share with my lover. Thanks for the lift!

This was delightful - nice buildup of erotic tension, realistic characters, and left us wanting episode 2.

Emailed this one to my girlfriend

Hot, sexy and Literate. Not to mention a nice length, yet contained a story. WEll done~!

I loved the slow, teasing pace of the story. It was a very sexy scenario . . . realistic enough to be very erotic, yet with a little mystery, as well. Nicely done.