All Comments on 'Dianne and William Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
With friends like that...

... she is better off on her own! Cam and Alex acted pretty callously for "friends" who understood what was happening, Dianne broke up with Alex before proceeding, and she trustingly confided deeply with Cam... yet Alex and Cam act so aggrieved and cruel with their escapades... seriously, what friendship did they ever share if they were so eager to hurt? Cam knowingly seduced Dianne knowing WIll had an issue with such things, and then Cam seduced Alex knowing it would hurt Dianne... what a nice "friend". lol <p> Great story overall, I am left wondering if William will grow up and finally become a man, but he does seem to be kind of wimpy, of a weak character, or perhaps far too emotionally detached to really be considered a man who will fight for what he wants. It seems like he withdraws and walks away far too easily which is not a good sign of sincerity, especially when she needs a true friend the most as she is left to face the abuse of her false friends alone. <p>

What would have happened to the story if Will had told Alex and Cam to stop being asshats, to basically go fuck off and think about how childishly hurtful they had been? Why didn't Will act protectively for the one he loved? Dianne was hurt, lost in the corner while Cam and Alex were obviously tormenting her... she will always remember that he abandoned her when she spoke from pain. Consider this: if they have a child and she's cursing and screaming in labour, doesn't Will seem like the kind of guy who would burst into tears and run away thinking that his wife no longer loves him due to what she is screaming as she is trying to cope with labour pains? Man-up, Will!! lol

<p> Anyways, curious to see how this story works out as the young lovers try to grow into an adult relationship for once.

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