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The End.
- COMMENTS
anchorman0214 minutes agodisappointing ending ... life is never that cut and dried ... and what makes Loren think he can just "command" the women, including his wife, to upset their entire lives because that's what he wants, and he has decreed that's good for everyone
oldgraycat3 months agoWhat a great story, kind of wish that it just went on and on it was just that good.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoWhat I like about your yarns is the fact that they all have a story, are not full of mindless sex but sufficient to maintain my interest and still be very erotic. Congratulation!!
CmdrRaabbover 13 years agoDamn, You just keep getting better and better. Keep up the good work and write more stories like this. Keep putting in the boats and the cruises along the east coast and the Caribbean.
Too Bad you just can't find a way to keep this story going just a little longer. Like telling us if they go for his idea, and plus what happens to Chuck, Sandy, and Gwen.
