All Comments on 'Dominance Corporation, Inc. Ch. 04'

I think that all around, this is an amazing storyline. However, the chapters should be longer with slightly more action in each. Besides that though, EXCELLENT. Honestly, fantastic job.

I agree with the other user, the chapters should be a little longer. Perhaps we can get to know RJ better? He's so mysterious. Besides that, great job, you're a great writer!

a excellent submission of not only a well written peice but, again the feeling, the passion, the knowledge of a true D/s relationship in the making. i do love this story for its realism and fact as well as its way of leading the reader along with the story. i do agree also a bit longer would be nice but...to have something done so well...is much better than having a poorly peice of crap thrown out without the feeling and meaning this does. keep up the awesome work and i hope you keep this series going for a bit, it has a good future. Thank you. respectfully a fan in Texas

a excellent submission of not only a well written peice but, again the feeling, the passion, the knowledge of a true D/s relationship in the making. i do love this story for its realism and fact as well as its way of leading the reader along with the story. i do agree also a bit longer would be nice but...to have something done so well...is much better than having a poorly peice of crap thrown out without the feeling and meaning this does. keep up the awesome work and i hope you keep this series going for a bit, it has a good future. Thank you. respectfully a fan in Texas