All Comments on 'Dream Lover'

and this story was intriquing, but it felt incomplete and left me feeling unfilled. Not in a sexual sense, it was more like reading just a little of a really great book and then having it taken away before you could finish it. The idea is interesting; I hope you will develop it.

P.S. I really enjoyed your first three stories and hope that you will start posting on at least a semi-regular basis.

OK I am hooked!!! Hope there are aditional Chapters to this one,great start. You have a wonderful way with writing what you are thinking and feeling. Looking forward to more of the same.

That was good and written well. I'd have given it a five.

that was pointless and stupid. horrible writing.

u r awesome u r me i am like totally in to the paranormal like vampires and demons and naughty angels i luv u i hpe u reply cause i am a totally fan completly under ur every word and um this is random but do u like twilght the movie and/or book

Very good story, and very unique 👌