by darkphoenix1
u r awesome u r me i am like totally in to the paranormal like vampires and demons and naughty angels i luv u i hpe u reply cause i am a totally fan completly under ur every word and um this is random but do u like twilght the movie and/or book
That was good and written well. I'd have given it a five.
OK I am hooked!!! Hope there are aditional Chapters to this one,great start. You have a wonderful way with writing what you are thinking and feeling. Looking forward to more of the same.
and this story was intriquing, but it felt incomplete and left me feeling unfilled. Not in a sexual sense, it was more like reading just a little of a really great book and then having it taken away before you could finish it. The idea is interesting; I hope you will develop it.
P.S. I really enjoyed your first three stories and hope that you will start posting on at least a semi-regular basis.