All Comments on 'Dry Valley Ch. 10'

gotwood;

Two chapters in a row and my heart is breaking. Red you got to rescue us! Thank You. Ronnie W.

I agree with Ronnie below. Somebody else take over this story (Red!) and lets read some yummy stuff about Mitch and Jess. Not really "likin" this dark stuff with Jonas.

Well written addition to the thread gotwood! I like the idea of bringing in a twist. Just like a true blue romance novel...even a bad guy in the mix. ;) What better to prove love then a damsel in distress... Hmmmmmm... we'll see. Great writing and great addition. I loved it. :D

Very nice writing, Woody....He's quite the evil one. I can't wait to see how he weaves his way into our story. Knowing you, it will be quite interesting and have a twist. Can't wait to read your next chapter.

Great Chapter. I agree, every story needs at least one bad guy, and you definitely got this character pegged!