by gotwood49
Great Chapter. I agree, every story needs at least one bad guy, and you definitely got this character pegged!
Very nice writing, Woody....He's quite the evil one. I can't wait to see how he weaves his way into our story. Knowing you, it will be quite interesting and have a twist. Can't wait to read your next chapter.
Well written addition to the thread gotwood! I like the idea of bringing in a twist. Just like a true blue romance novel...even a bad guy in the mix. ;) What better to prove love then a damsel in distress... Hmmmmmm... we'll see. Great writing and great addition. I loved it. :D
I agree with Ronnie below. Somebody else take over this story (Red!) and lets read some yummy stuff about Mitch and Jess. Not really "likin" this dark stuff with Jonas.
gotwood;
Two chapters in a row and my heart is breaking. Red you got to rescue us! Thank You. Ronnie W.