All Comments on 'Eden Ch. 01'

Oh my god!!! - Jailhouse Rock was great and this is even better. For a budding author you definately know how to put the words together. Please please don't make me wait too long for the next part.

i cannot wait for chapter two! i can just imagine all the things aidan will do to eden once he gets her home!!

This is the first story of yours that I've read and I love it. I hate that you left us hanging but I can't wait to read chapter 2.

Fantastic! I can't wait to see where these two go from here!!

story.Looking forward to the next part.

I find the whole boss/secretary an interesting and desirable conflict. I thought this was well written and extremely on point. Good job.