All Comments on 'Emelina Ch. 01'

I LIKE IT SO FAR BUT THIS WAS WAY TO SHORT FOR MY TASTE DON'T B ANOTHER ONE HIT WONDER ON THIS SITE CAUSE THERE'S IS ENOUGH OF THOSE ON HER ALREADY

I LIKED IT ALOT. PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON. BECAUSE CAN ANYONE SAY SEXUAL TENSION....

But lose the "cos"

the plot is wonderful , but try writing in the past tense , it would work better and will probably be easier for you .

but find an editor who will help you out. Your story will flow better and be more enjoyable!

Love battle of the sexes and since Emelina is a high flying lawyer, am certainly looking forward to see both of them at war with words.

I hope you write more to this story! I cannot wait to know what else happens!!