All Comments on 'Enslaved by Marilyn Ch. 06'

I hope Frank gives her a black eye on his way out. Your dialogue needs a lot of work. And the story line is repetitive, unimaginative and not very interesting. Mostly pretty silly.

Are you kidding me? "Stir hot coffee with his penis", I think Frank should beat Linda to a bloody pulp when they get home and lock her under the stairs. Horrible.