All Comments on 'Esmerelda Ch. 03'

I'm glad that they have begun to love each other even though they haven't said it out loud yet to one another. I can only guess who that person that has interupted them is.

I was so glad you finally put up ch. 3! I checked like everyday! Love it! Can't wait for the next one!

Yay! I really love this story! It reminds me of another story called Dark Desires. Also about a vampire and succubus. Have you read it?

That was really good! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

I love this story so much! Can't wait to find out who that person is! And for his reaction!

That's so sweet that they're falling in love! I hope nothing bad happens to them. I have no idea who that person is! Is it another evil vampire?

Tis very interesting. When's the next chapter coming?

I don't know wether to be glad or mad. Glad because there's another chapter or mad because of the cliffhanger. Great story nonetheless. Is there to be another chapter?