All Comments on 'Fantasy Crossroads'

Nicely done. Keep writing! thanks

excellent work. Well paced, real people/couples.

Doubt I would have lasted more than the first "act".

I enjoyed the setup, pacing and plot. It was very sexy and crisply written. Bravo!

Excellent story. Very well written. Please send in more or your work.

Great believeable story line with good character development. Very stimulating. Can't wait for the next story.

This is one hot story! Beautifully done. Five Stars!

I have ever read anything this hot!

'Metamorphosis' led me to your work. I chose this story as a sample of your earlier efforts. You are among the very best authors on this site. I look forward to reading the rest of your stories. Please keep writing.

A stimulating scenario with a perfect outcome. I like how this author always treats his women with respect.

My ex-boyfriend and I did something similar to the scenario in your story. I loved it but he couldn't handle it after it was all over. Our relationship ended soon after. I am now married to a much more open-minded man. We have found several other couples who enjoy this sort of thing. I'm going to share this story with them. Well done. You write beautifully.

SEXY SEXY SEXY!!! BRAVO! VERY WELL DONE!

Loved the story until that last bit about it being a one time thing. No one does something that enjoyable and doesn't want to do it again.

of my original story. I changed the ending in response to theMasterBaiter's comment dated 2/22/18. He was right on the mark. Anything as pleasurable as what Haley and Max experienced shouldn't be a one-time deal. Perhaps a sequel or two might be appropriate.

Very proud and happy to have been constructive for a fellow author. Let me know if you have an interest in joining an editors group. Our little google hangout group helps each other edit and improve each others stories. We've found it really helps and would welcome another author.

and liked it a lot. This one is better and I'm looking forward to sequels!

I missed this story. I've read most of your work. Saw that there is a Part 2, so I looped back to read this one first. Loved it. Off to read the new one, 5* for this one.

Fantastic story of a loving couple 5 stars and I hope they find many more fantasies to satisfy them, The other couple and them should be part of them all.