All Comments on 'Fathers and Daughters Ch. 02'

I enjoy your writing, it's very good!! You had me laughing and it was hot too. Keep writing Please!!

I'd just love to be in his place with my own daughter and her friend .No harm in dreaming .

Gee Dave;

You started fine...Chpt 1, ending was very good... Gave you a 5. Great! You started out with a guy, like a lot of us. Older, and reading these stories to get a little kick.

Chpt 2, Now in this one you are turning him into a wimp. Why would you think that reading about some guy jacking-off while looking at his girls cunt for the first time, is a turn-on??? And then falling asleep while her friend is eating her? Now if there were a little sucking going on it would be different. I gave you a 2, and that was because I'm nice. No hard feelings...No pun intended,

Ralph

Love the sexual tension and how he attempts to fight it.... love that his daughter put on a show for him the way she did by showing him her pussy. Would have also been hot if he screamed and came as soon as he saw this due to the sheer beauty of seeing his daughter like this..

And thank you for introducing me to Alison Angel!