All Comments on 'Finding Himself in Her Ch. 01'

OMG what a beautiful sexy beginning!! Please continue

... to what promises to be a fine story - well done - 4 *s. I shall keep my eyes open for chaptyer 2.

Thank you, Mr_Owlow

Wow. Suck a great story. Wish I had a girl like that. Can't wait for more.

Excellent story. I loved the plot and you descriptions were clear and full of detail (Great writing). I cannot wait for future chapters.

Great pacing and feel for the subject. You simply must give us more! (5)

wow I felt like I was there !!!! can't wait to read the next chapter

I've just read the Reborn, which had my excitement level on all high, so this story is just a warm and lovely adventure. Nothing really special.

Hopefully it will change in the next chapter.

I wish I were in Jamie's place, I've actually dreamed about it. Awesome story and very well written!

I really liked it and kindof want a relationship like this myself. I have already finished the series.

I'm almost envious of him. love to see where this goes.

An interesting start, definately worthy of 5 stars! Look forward to reading the other chapters.