by Mr_Owlow
An interesting start, definately worthy of 5 stars! Look forward to reading the other chapters.
I really liked it and kindof want a relationship like this myself. I have already finished the series.
I wish I were in Jamie's place, I've actually dreamed about it. Awesome story and very well written!
I've just read the Reborn, which had my excitement level on all high, so this story is just a warm and lovely adventure. Nothing really special.
Hopefully it will change in the next chapter.
wow I felt like I was there !!!! can't wait to read the next chapter
Great pacing and feel for the subject. You simply must give us more! (5)
Excellent story. I loved the plot and you descriptions were clear and full of detail (Great writing). I cannot wait for future chapters.
Wow. Suck a great story. Wish I had a girl like that. Can't wait for more.
... to what promises to be a fine story - well done - 4 *s. I shall keep my eyes open for chaptyer 2.
Thank you, Mr_Owlow