All Comments on 'Friends, Legs and Lovers'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
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She "has on shorts" so of course he slides his hand up her "skirt". Several such things, and loose writing drop the rating of this story. Go back to the original scene in your mind, then tighten up the writing and it could be a 4 or even a 5.

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