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Click hereAs the last person reentered the main building, all the broadcast lights went out and the playing field went dark.
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Anonymousover 14 years agoA lot of interesting ideas and they were well execute. A couple of name switches but I didn't get hung up on them. Just REALLY enjoyed it. Thanks again.
Anonymousover 19 years agoI enjoyed the stories --unusual setting and theme, not to mention a seminary student's faith being tested.... how delicious. They got off to a slow start and I wish some of the short, one-page chapters would be conected into a single longer one to keep the flow going without having to return to the index so often.
I was hoping to see Nancy wind up getting it up the ass; but the mouth was a good second choice and allowed for her mortification and the display/swallowing gambit.
While it's fun to see Carol dragged into the action, I thought the action with Carol's boobs was "over the top" literally and figuratively -- and perhaps unnecessarily cruel.
I noticed the name confusion; and note that the author has been made aware of it; however, it has not been corrected yet.
Anonymousabout 20 years agoInteresting story and your characters: Nancy and Carol are
great ;)
But, wish it was a little bit more erotic.
mcfbridgeabout 20 years agoAuthorYes, there will be an epilogue.
I'm sorry, you are correct the names were mixed up a few times. I've submitted a corrected version and hope it will show up soon.
