All Comments on 'Give and Take Ch. 02'

Sorry to say this.. But i find this story so confusing. I can't figure out who's who and what happens in between. This could be a good read/story if we would get some more background stories on both males. It just needs something more. I'll give a 3.

I think you need to give a clearer distinction on who's who. I feel like you rushed us into their "relationship" without any kind of background on the characters. I know this is a site for erotica but a little background on your characters doesn't hurt. Two stars.

Going to have to give this a "1" for not having the right tags. Under "Tags For This Story" you have the "gender bender" tag, but at no point in the story does anyone's gender get changed. And this is clearly a gay story, but there is no "gay" tag.