All Comments on 'Gotham Girls Pt. 04'

by lordroxbury

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good but...

The exclamation points in your stories are way overdone and really detract from the story itself. If you're using more than five exclamation points for a story of this nature, it's too many.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hot

Good hot story, and I like your style.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

" if any of the other girls in Batman's extended 'family' had ever enjoyed these fingers the way that she was"

Sounds like we need an orgy with Nightwing and multiple Batgirls

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

more of this pairing, please!

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